Final DPS.

This is my final double page spread.

MY PEER ASSESSMENT AND STUFF.

My peer assessment of my Double-page spread got, overall,fair positive results.  From what was said, people were fans of my main image, saying that it was a good, strong and striking image. Also people commented positively on my decision to use a running theme from the red and white stripes of the T-shirt in my image and use it as a background banner for my DPS title. My colour choice of the yellow and the red together got mixed reviews with some people liking it and others not so keen. personally, i like the contrast.

As positive criticism I was advised to try and write a further, more detailed article to accompany the page, although some people liked the way it was arranged, it was agreed that more text was needed. It was also suggested that maybe I should try changing the questions of the 'Q and A' into Red font to match the red banner and T-short stripes, however i did experiment with this but did not like it as much.

To improve the page I intend on making the large quote on the left hand side significantly smaller and maybe make the image a bit smaller also to allow more space for further text to be inserted. I also need to fix the fonts as I started on a separate computer which had different fonts and finished on one that didn't have them, so i need to choose a suitable, consistent font type and size.

My First Vlog Entry;)

HAHA. This is My First Vlog Entry;)   Simply sensational, isn't it?;)


A Video blog explaining what stage i am at with my magazine progress, what i have done so far, what i still need to do, and ways that i intend to rectify errors.